The Devil’s Rooming House: The True Story of America’s Deadliest Female Serial Killer by M. William Phelps
My rating: 2 of 5 stars
The true story of America’s most prolific serial killer, Amy Archer-Gilligan, is fascinating. But the author’s writing style and poor editing detracted from this true crime story. Certain sections were repetitive. Also, the parallels between the heat wave of 1911 and the serial murders were not well demonstrated. I think Phelps has tremendous talent and truly knows his topic. But he/his editors decided to write in an everyman vernacular which degraded the quality of this book. I speculate that he was trying to be dramatic but this just came across as poor writing that would earn you an F in English class. Some sentences were overly long and others weren’t even true sentences.
For example:
It was near 3:00 p.m. when, a few miles away from this treacherous corner, a Fairfield police officer, patrolling his normal beat on Fairfield Avenue, heard a tremendous crash. Steel against steel. Crumbling and twisting. He ran.p.49
Phelps frequently referred to male figures as “the guy” which was also distracting. He made a serious and professional study of this case; it would have been more appropriate and compelling to write professionally. Yet in other paragraphs and sometimes whole chapters Phelps writes beautifully and pulls the reader into this tale. Chapter 30, Grave Robbers, is one such example. Phelps describes the exhumation and autopsy of one victim in a clear and concise way. The reader understands the science and horror of the crime. I only finished this book as I live in Connecticut and have a strong interest in local history. If The Devil’s Rooming House was reorganized and edited, I think it would be superb.
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